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posted by 방랑군 2010. 3. 5. 17:22

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

 

"Prevention is better than cure." 
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

 

You should write at least 250 words.

 

model answer:

Of course it goes without saying that prevention is better than cure. That is why, in recent years, there has been a growing body of opinion in favour of putting more resources into health education and preventive measures. The argument is that ignorance of, for example, basic hygiene or the dangers of an unhealthy diet or lifestyle needs to be combatted by special nationwide publicity campaigns, as well as longer-term health education.

Obviously,there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early as possible. There is also an economic argument for doing so. Statistics demonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating a condition in the early stages, rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary. Then there are social or economic costs, perhaps in terms of loss of earnings for the family concerned or unemployed benefit paid by the state.

So far so good, but the difficulties start when we try to define what the 'proportion' of the budget should be, particularly if the funds will be 'diverted from treatment'. Decisions on exactly how much of the total health budget should be spent in this way are not a matter for the non-specialist, but should be made on the basis of an accepted health service model.

This is the point at which real problems occur - the formulation of the model. How do we accurately measure which health education campaigns are effective in both medical and financial terms? How do we agree about the medical efficacy of various screening programmes, for example, when the medical establishment itself does not agree? A very rigorous process of eval!uation is called for, so that we can make informed decisions.

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posted by 방랑군 2010. 3. 5. 10:57

IELTS 전형적인 작문 주제(30)

  The following is a list of IELTS sample writing questions for you to try out. Some of them also include Academic and General Training questions.

 

1Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. use specific reasons

 

2It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and examples in your answer.

 

3Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

 

4Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer? Explain why.

 

5Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.

 

6Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

7. You want to persuade someone to study your native language. What reasons would you give? Support your answer with specific details.

 

8. You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park, a regional park, or a national park. What improvements would you make? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendations.

 

9. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

 

10. Films can tell us a lot about the country in which they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.

 

11. Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Give reasons to support your answer.

 

12. Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Give reasons to support your answer.

 

13. If you could invent something new. what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention in needed.

 

14. It has been said." Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? why?

 

15. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

16. Because of developments in communication and transportationcountries are becoming more and more alike. How is your country becoming more similar to other places in the world? Use specific examples and details support your answer.

 

17. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific example to support your answer.

 

18. People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons( for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge) why do you think people attend colleges? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

19. In general. people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and detail to develop your essay.

 

20. Over past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost. What is the cause and is it a good development or bad development?

 

21. You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied because there are something wrong with the furniture. So write a letter to the landlord and ask how to resole the problem.

 

22. Young people are exposed to a great amount of information such as film, book, Internet. In what ways they give bad influence on young people and explain the reason, how to reduce the bad influence with examples.

 

23.

(A) Do you think government should subsidizes the musicians, artists, actors or drama companies, do u agree or disagree, what should government do?

 

(G) People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.

 

24.

(A) Some people believe that a country should have the moral obligation to help the other country and some of the people think that exist the misspending of the government and the aid money can not be got by the poor. What is your opinion?

 

(G) Some people think that children’s lives will be different from their own. Whit is your opinion? Explain the reasons by your experience and examples.

 

25.

(A) Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society, therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?

 

(G) Today some person has to work away from his family, what is the advantages and disadvantages? Give your opinion and some explains of your experience.

 

26.

(A) Someone say the age of book is past, the info will be presented by some multimedia tools such as video, computer, television and film , others think the book and the written words will be necessary for spread info & complete education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

 

(G) The culture of different countries are becoming similar so there is no pint for people to go traveling abroad for they could have same experience at home agree or disagree.

 

27. Parent should limit children time of watching TV and playing computer game, others Insister children spend reading books, agree or disagree?

 

28. Traveling abroad work for period of months or years, advantages or disadvantages to people and country

 

29. Do you think people do different jobs they should have different time holiday are you agree or disagree , give your reason an explain.

 

30. Some people said should not encourage sport at school because it will cause competition rather than co-operation. to what extend you agree with it?

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posted by 방랑군 2009. 12. 14. 17:41

Today's Writing

 

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
  • You do NOT need to write your own address.


<Model Answer>

 

Dear Anita

Sorry I haven't written for ages. I've been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have a minute to myself.

I'd like to study electrical engineering at university in Australia next year and I hope you can give me some advice. I think I would prefer Melbourne because I know a few people from my visit last year.

This year I'm doing maths and physics at school and I hope to do well in my exams. However, I really don't know which university to apply to, so could you send me some information about different colleges? Also can you find out what qualifications I need? For intance, as an oversease student, do I have to take an English test?
I hope you don't mind doing this for me. It is much better to get this information from someone who lives in the country, so I hope to hear from you soon.

Many thanks,

Rosanna


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posted by 방랑군 2009. 10. 19. 13:26


Today's Writing

 

You find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.

You should write at least 150 words.


You should spend about 20 minutes on this task



Model Answer

 

Dear Prof. James,

 

I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619)

The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. In the beginning of the term, I was perhaps overly optimistic about juggling both my full time studies and my part time job (20 hours/week). Because I really must work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. I am planning on taking the two courses during the summer semester, if they are available, so that I will be able to complete all the courses for the degree program by the following year.

I would also like to request a tuition refund, and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the kind consideration you have shown to me.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Jane Carter


1.

have no choice  but to 동원

= have no other way but to 동원

= cannot help  ~ing

= caannot but  동원  

= cannot choose but 동원

= have no alternative but to 동원

 

have no choice  but to 동사원형 = ~하지 않을수 없다,


2. 비굴 모드 --;

 : 너무 심한 격식 차리는 문장들...... 




-- Another Answer


Dear Sir or Madam.

 

 

I am writing to ask for my study load.I’d like to talk about my study load this term and get some advice from you. I find that seven classes are too heavy for me. I thought I could handle more than five classes because two of them cover similar subject areas, all of which I was very familiar with. However, I find none of the courses easy. I spend all my weekend doing homework and studying, but I just don’t have enough time to cover all the courses. I think I need to withdraw from two courses.

I would like to withdraw from two courses in this term. When I had a decision for studying. I thought that I could study all courses . But this was my mistake.

I realized that they I took to study were too heavy for me when I attended in seven courses last week. If I kept to study all of my courses. I could not get the scores that I need for graduating.

I must graduate this term because I have already been offered the job from I.B.M. This offered is a good chance for me. I have always wanted to work for here but if I did not got the scores that I need for graduation.[D1] 

I have to give up this chance.

And I am also worried about getting I would like to ask one more thing for obtaining a refund if it is possible. I hope that it will not be too late to obtain a refund.

I am forward to hearing you soon.




1. 

내용이 좀 허술하다...  --;









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posted by 방랑군 2009. 10. 16. 15:31

Today's Writing

 

You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. 

Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.


1.  the following job

2. 



<Model Answer>

 

Dear Mr. Moore, 

Re: Waitress position 

I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details of my previous experience and qualifications. 

Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. In my last waitress job, I had over a dozen repeat customers each day. And, the fast-paced environment of waiting on tables suits me well, because I thrive on working under pressure. In fact, my former boss was surprised at both my incredible stamina and efficiency in dealing with customers’ orders. 

I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. I can be reached at 463-9234 during the days and 924-6868 after 6 pm. 

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. 

Yours sincerely, 

Martha Scott



1. Enclosed with this letter is my resume

    : 쓰는 타입이 특이함..

       나의 이력서를 편지를 통해 동봉합니다.


   Enclosed is~[~을 동봉한다]





 

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posted by 방랑군 2009. 10. 15. 12:18


Today's Writing

 

One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time.

Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

1. 문제파악이 전혀 안되고 있다...
    의역이 안되서 생기는 상황 --;




Model Answer

 

Dear Mary, 

I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. Just think: after all these years to writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive. 

The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest time I can get to the airport will be about an hour after you land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge. You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait. 

By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am of medium height and have a small mustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left arm. 

Looking forward to our first meeting. 

Yours sincerely, 

Harry



1. "the quickest time I can get to the airport will be about an hour after you land"

 아니 이걸 어떻게 영작했지?

 한국사람이 과연 이런식으로 할수 있단 말인가 --;




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posted by 방랑군 2009. 10. 14. 10:23


Today's Writing

 

You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in – history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.




<Model Answer>

 

Dear John, 

You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university, and I will try to make some useful suggestions. 

You must keep in mind that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. There is no doubt that the field of computers offers far wider job opportunities than history. 

Besides, we are now in the age of the high-technology revolution. For the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer-literate, it will also be necessary for them to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living! History, I’m afraid, however fascinating it may be, offers few career prospects. 

Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computers and nothing else. On the contrary, I would recommend that you keep your reading of history in your spare time. That way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computers. 

Yours sincerely, 

James

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posted by 방랑군 2009. 10. 6. 10:00

  오늘은 전체 파악만 --;


Today's Writing


You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

-- 나만의 해석 및 궁금증.
 :  let me check out. [체크하기] ??
 1.  have just spent - 보냈었다??
 2.  staying at the Lilo Hotel  - 호텔에 머무르면서??
 3. have left a bag - 가방을 남겨두고 ??
     : 왜 완료문?



<Model Answer>

 

Dear Mr. Simpson, 

I stayed in your hotel on the 23rd and 24th of October. I was in Room 603. When I arrived home, I discovered that I had left one of my bags at the hotel. Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there? 

The bag is a small black leather, document case with a narrow strap. Inside the bag, you will find several business cards, a fountain pen, a small address book, three copies of a business proposal and a silver pocket calculator. These things are not very valuable in money terms, but they have a lot of personal value. 

I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible, particularly since I need the proposals for a presentation this week. If you could send the bag to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I have arranged to pay for the service. 

Thank you for your help. 

Yours sincerely, 

Michael Johnson



-- 나만의 해석 및 궁금증.


1. 상황 제현 - 문제에 대한 답변 형식은 시험보는 사람맘




# KEY WORDS.

Lost and Found Department : 분실물 센터










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